Perzen Patel
@perzen
I want to take you beyond butter chicken. Indian food advocate, small biz owner and story-teller by passion. Communications professional and writer by trade. Mom to two boys with 1,000,000 questions daily 24/7.
Perzen Patel
perzen.substack.com
Rewrite the text below for professional clarity and impact.
- Keep every idea and fact. Only modify if the original is ambiguous or grammatically incorrect.
- Use active voice throughout. Maximum three sentences per paragraph, each under 20 words.
- Alternate between short (5-10 words) and medium (15-20 words) sentences.
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- Keep every idea and fact. Only modify if the original is ambiguous or grammatically incorrect.
- Use active voice throughout. Maximum three sentences per paragraph, each under 20 words.
- Alternate between short (5-10 words) and medium (15-20 words) sentences.
- Replace complex words with... See more
Winning the game of life requires you to focus on the cards you have and choosing what to do with them.
Mel Robbins • The Let Them Theory
Rewrite the text below so it reads like one incisive professional talking to another.
- Keep every idea and fact unless changing it makes the point clearer.
- Active voice. Paragraphs no longer than three short sentences.
- Vary sentence length; avoid a metronome rhythm.
- Swap jargon or $10 words for plain ones. Use contractions.
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- Keep every idea and fact unless changing it makes the point clearer.
- Active voice. Paragraphs no longer than three short sentences.
- Vary sentence length; avoid a metronome rhythm.
- Swap jargon or $10 words for plain ones. Use contractions.
- Delete clichés,... See more
AI and my voice and AI prompts content creation
Making my writing sound human
Friends and family and Making friends
On being the first one
Do you ever feel like your business standards are lower than they should be?
If so, identify the three most important aspects of your business — maybe it's your product, your customer service, and your team (if you have one). Write down the current standard for each category. And then write down what excellence actually looks like.
The gap between... See more
If so, identify the three most important aspects of your business — maybe it's your product, your customer service, and your team (if you have one). Write down the current standard for each category. And then write down what excellence actually looks like.
The gap between... See more
Everyone is a leader and Interesting 2 x 2 matrices
Coaching vs telling
taste isn’t a weapon you deploy in the marketplace or a purity you protect from the machine; it’s the slow, inefficient work of becoming someone who can make things that are good and true, machines and all.
How AI might change our world and
What is “taste” really?
Whatever feels the most painful – that’s first place to start. Ask yourself: what can I do to make it easier for them?
And if you’re not sure – ask them. I dare you.
Because you make it easier for them, you make it easier for you.
And if you’re not sure – ask them. I dare you.
Because you make it easier for them, you make it easier for you.