EA: sound
I like the idea of using specific literary forms (ie: parataxis) to tie 2 events together in a theme. Using the form on it’s own is (potentially) meaningless, but if you use the same syntax in two intentional places, it creates a semantic relationship that could be very interesting.
Word choice often comes down syllabicity as much as it comes down to meaning.
The last sentence of every paragraph benefits from an interline rhyme.
How do you syncopate a sentence?
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