EA: sound

The last sentence of every paragraph benefits from an interline rhyme.

Word choice often comes down syllabicity as much as it comes down to meaning.

How do you syncopate a sentence?

I like the idea of using specific literary forms (ie: parataxis) to tie 2 events together in a theme. Using the form on it’s own is (potentially) meaningless, but if you use the same syntax in two intentional places, it creates a semantic relationship that could be very interesting.