
Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)

How should a man act, given these circumstances? He understood things had been done. He did not understand what things now were to be done. The house was very quiet.
Raymond Carver • Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)
He remembered: deaths. Jimmy first.
Raymond Carver • Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)
No dialogue...
“Well, that’s the way I am,” Edith said. “He’ll have to get used to it, that’s all. That’s the way I am.” “That’s the way she is,” the other woman said.
Raymond Carver • Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)
I love his unique dialogue style
“Aren’t you going to load it, Papa?” the boy Benny asked from behind.
Raymond Carver • Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)
I have struggled multiple times to gEt into tis story. I think becauss it has so many charctwrs in opening. Tough to get oriented
“He’s a salesman.
Raymond Carver • Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (Vintage Contemporaries)
The whole story is built in this one line. Wow.