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On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction

humanity. I explained about using active verbs and avoiding “concept nouns.” I told them not to use the special vocabulary of education as a crutch; almost any subject can be made accessible in good English.
William Zinsser • On Writing Well, 30th Anniversary Edition: An Informal Guide to Writing Nonfiction
The following passage by Enrique Hank Lopez, “Back to Bachimba,”