On Writing Well, 30th Anniversary Edition: An Informal Guide to Writing Nonfiction
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On Writing Well, 30th Anniversary Edition: An Informal Guide to Writing Nonfiction

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basic questions before you start. For example: “In what capacity am I going to address the reader?” (Reporter? Provider of information? Average man or woman?) “What pronoun and tense am I going to use?” “What style?” (Impersonal reportorial? Personal but formal? Personal and casual?) “What attitude am I going to take toward the material?”
... See moreI recited my four articles of faith: clarity, simplicity, brevity and humanity.
You only have to remember that readers identify with people, not with abstractions like “profitability,” or with Latinate nouns like “utilization” and “implementation,” or with inert constructions in which nobody can be visualized doing something: “pre-feasibility studies are in the paperwork stage.”
Economy and survival are the two key words in nature.
Use your own experience to connect the reader to some mechanism that also touches his life.
But on the question of who you’re writing for, don’t be eager to please. If you consciously write for a teacher or for an editor, you’ll end up not writing for anybody. If you write for yourself, you’ll reach the people you want to write for.
The article that records everything you did on your trip will fascinate you because it was your trip. Will it fascinate the reader? It won’t. The mere agglomeration of detail is no free pass to the reader’s interest. The detail must be significant.
He enjoyed his trip so much that he wants to tell us all about it—and “all” is what we don’t want to hear.
But after that your duty is to the reader. He or she deserves the tightest package.