How to Write Dazzling Dialogue: The Fastest Way to Improve Any Manuscript
The Story Works Guide to Writing Character: How to create memorable characters your readers can't help but love--or love to hate. (The Story Works Guide to Writing Fiction Series Book 1)
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The Art of Character: Creating Memorable Characters for Fiction, Film, and TV
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For most characters, reading their dialog aloud will be enough to give you a good feel for how it flows and whether it still captures that character’s personality.