
Fall; or, Dodge in Hell: A Novel

The Internet—what Dodge used to call the Miasma—had just gone completely wrong. Down to the molecular level it was still a hippie grad student project. Like a geodesic dome that a bunch of flower children had assembled from scrap lumber on ground infested with termites and carpenter ants.
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He went into the building musing on the weird role that his society had picked out for him as a guy who had built, or caused to be built, an imaginary world.
Neal Stephenson • Fall; or, Dodge in Hell: A Novel
This is how you expose a characer, through little snippets, thoughts, memories and behaviors sprinkled into the drawn out action and detail of simply living a morning or day. Pace it.
Corvallis Kawasaki
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shift to new character quasi-perspective - its all told from omniscient
But why this particular something? He construed it as black and yellow danger stripes, on-the-fritz TV sets, etc., but that was only because he was a white guy of a certain age from Iowa. A Maori midwife or a gay Roman centurion or an eleventh-century Shinto Buddhist, in the grip of the same underlying neurological phenomenon, would fill in the “no
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more likely what edit stream he subscribed to and what particular flavor of post-reality it was pumping into his mind.
Neal Stephenson • Fall; or, Dodge in Hell: A Novel
Richard, who was ruddy and freckle prone, had for decades been psyching himself up for a climactic battle with melanoma, which, according to dark prophecies uttered by multiple dermatologists, loomed as a near certainty in his future. Early on he had performed his monthly skin checks with anxiety bordering on clinical paranoia. But then years had f
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become conscious and extracted his soul from chaos,
Neal Stephenson • Fall; or, Dodge in Hell: A Novel
Direct, unfiltered exposure to said flumes—the torrent of porn, propaganda, and death threats, 99.9 percent of which were algorithmically generated and never actually seen by human eyes—was relegated to a combination of AIs and Third World eyeball farms, which was to say huge warehouses in hot places where people sat on benches or milled around gaz
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But he could remember being eighteen years old, driving all over the western United States and Canada in various beat-up vehicles, and being overtaken every afternoon by a need for sleep so intense it was almost painful.