Meg Hapgood
@mhappy
Meg Hapgood
@mhappy
What does your protagonist think they want?
What’s really missing from their life?
How might this tension show up in the way they speak, act, or move through the opening pages?
Stop trying to write like a “serious” author. The world has enough stiff, self-important writing. Loosen up. Make a joke. Break a rule. Start a sentence with “and.” Great writing isn’t about sounding like literature—it’s about sounding like life. And life is messy, chaotic, and alive. Let your pages breathe.
Montreal, 1947. Late November, bleak winter, when every trip outdoors after five p.m. felt like suicide.
Playground - Richard Powers
I began to experience the most powerful advantage of money: the ability to think of things besides money. My professors came into focus, suddenly and sharply; it was as if before the grant I’d been looking at them through a blurred lens. My textbooks began to make sense, and I found myself doing more than the required reading.
If I ask what I’m asking only of people who agree with me at the outset, with whom I already share a dream and a language, then there’s no point in asking at all.
The clumping masses of its buildings are punctuated by great high towers like fingers of stone, hand-wrought lanterns powered by the modern marvel of hydroelectricity, delicately arching bridges woven of glass and audacity, and architectural structures called balconies that are so simple, yet so breathtakingly foolish, that no one has ever built
... See morePlus, I only informed him this research was off the record, and I hadn’t stated why. I planned to explain more when we met for lunch in Tokyo. I’d just need to be judicious in how I approached him and with what I shared. Somewhere behind me a baby cried, and with the captain’s announcement, the fasten seat belts light came on. My ears popped with
... See moreUsing time passing to share info and thoughts
Nassun walks the cobbled path above the terrace briskly, with her head down so that she can concentrate on not stumbling, since she can’t sess anything after whatever Schaffa did to the six-ringed woman. She’s always known that Guardians can shut down orogeny, but never felt it before. It’s hard to walk when she can only perceive the ground with
... See moreHow much something (sess in this case) affects normal funcftioming
Most of the plots are planted heavily with grains and vegetables, and there are a number of people out working on them, since it’s a nice day and no one knows the Guardians are busily killing everyone in the admin building.